This is my final piece for my college magazine. I personally think it is pretty good as I do have the majority of the requirements on my front page. I got some feedback from some of my classmates and they said that my masthead is pretty good as it stands out. They liked my main image because of the focus adn the way it is in black and white but they said maybe I could have put a couple of other pictures on the front showing the contents inside. One person said they liked my selling line 'be iconic' because it's basically saying be yourself which is what you should do at college. They liked the way my coverlines were different colours contrasting with each other and standing out and being distinctive. I didn't put a price or barcode on my magazine though which is something that they said would help make it look more like a magazine and not a poster.





My contents didn't get finished becasue i spent more time on my front cover than this. This shows that i need to plan out a time schedule to make sure i get everything done in future work. I got some feedback on my contents page and they said htey liked the font and the way i put it all in capitals. I could've put boxes where i would put different sections of work but i ran out of time so unfortunately I didn't manage that.